Massive
Standing straight
Nearly reaching heaven
Filling up the sky
towering towards the fluffy clouds
Looming over Auckland city
Like a needle
Sky Tower
Amazing
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Dear Room 14,
ReplyDeleteWe really enjoyed Miss Venturi's Sky Tower poem and thought the pattern was really interesting.
We look forward to reading more of your work.
Please comment us!
Love Room 13
How lovely that you raised money to send to Samoa! What a lovely group of children you are!
ReplyDeleteYour Blog is awesome. Well done!
Your teacher is very clever with computers, I see she is good at poems too!
Say Hi to Miss Venturi from Mrs Casanelia.
A great Poem Miss Venturi.
ReplyDeleteNow we are all waiting for another!
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Room 21
That's was a really great poem you did and about sending money to Samoa.
ReplyDeleteThat was a really good poem Miss Venturi! The way you describe it. It made a great visual for me.
ReplyDeleteWOW Room 14, what a fantastic sky tower
ReplyDeletepoem! I really enjoyed it, especialy how you said it is nearly touching heaven.
Christina xoxo
Hi room 14,
ReplyDeleteWOW that was a really great poem about the sky tower! I really enjoyed reading your your beauitful sky tower poem! I hope you do some more beautiful poem about other things!
Leinati